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1. After the daughter turns back to look at UNmarked, There needs to be a scene where there's something reflective in the scene e.g. Puddle of water, piece of metal sheet etc. so that UNmarked can see her reflection and know why she's different.
She then turns back to look at the printer machine and the other daughters before she sees the markers and pencils on the desk.

2. The Zoom in to the shredder will now be a PULL-OUT from a Extreme CU to slowly reveal the shredder. Camera continues to zoom out through the hollow eye of UNmarked.