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Had a talk with Jeremy yesterday and was at the receiving end of..........some very nice feedback. It is now official that i will be taking out the scene where UNmarked tosses the desk caddy off the table due to conflicting directions. That scene seems to lead the audience to thinking that UNmarked is going to take revenge or something when what i actually want is for her life to go spiralling downwards from the point that she pokes her eye out. So bye bye desk caddy scene.

Optional endings:

1. Scene re-opens after the shredder and we see UNmarked's head lying next to the conveyor belt with the shadows of the parents and daughters passing over her.The world keeps on spinning despite her efforts and tragic end, which is really how the world works.

2. Scene re-opens with the familiar alarm associated with UNmarked's birth. But this time it's the parent's lights that are flashing red. UNmarked could've been happy or accepted if she had only stayed awhile longer.

3. Scene re-opens with a pull-out from a CU of UNmarked's face. We see the shadows of the parents passing over her implying that the world has not changed. We then realise that it's only the head of UNmarked lying there in a pile of other mangled figures.