Wednesday, July 21, 2004

 

Essential Parts to Story

1. Birth of unmarked child
a. Scenes of paper people coming out of machines.
b. Scenes of parents picking up their daughters and walking out of scene.
c. Daughter machine has a malfunction and spits out a crumpled unmarked daughter.

2. Shunned by parents
a. Parent's reaction to unmarked daughter.
b. Roughly pushes her aside and picks up another girl behind her.
c. Unmarked daughter 'looks' longingly at other girls being picked up by more parents

3. Stationery depot
a. Unmarked daughter spots a stationery depot and runs towards it.
b. Picks up a pen and starts marking herself, making a mess.
c. Spots a hole puncher and tries to punch out eyes but ends up looking worse.

4. Paper shredder
a. Daughter walks around looking depressed.
b. Spots a paper shredder.
c. Fades to black screen where we hear sounds of heavy object being pushed.
d. Paper shredder is now located under printer and is shredding up every girl that is born.

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